Junk Chronicles Season 3 Chapter 41(NEW):

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Neo Domino City, Clock Tower Square...

???: Now here I come! Junk Destroyer direct attack! End this duel

The giant robotic figure charged at the opponent delivering an incredebly strong punch. The life point meter in Redgar's duel disk hit 0 indicating his opponent had lost.

Redgar: Good duel once again. Although you are not in your top shape.

???: Considering I just got out of "there" you should admit I am dueling quite decent.

Redgar: Hahaha yeah I guess you are right. Well finally the day came. I wonder how the others are doing...

Meanwhile back in SDA...

Ace: Hahaha is that all? Go Ancient Fairy Dragon...DIRECT ATTACK!!!

Chazz: Not so fast! I activate the trap card Descending lost star returning back Powertool Dragon...

Winduct was sitting in the large couch of the elite 3 mansion. He was watching the duel between Ace and Chazz although his mind was elsewere. A sudden knock at the door woke him up from his daydreaming. The door opened and a tall figure entered.

Iverson: Good morning everyone! How are you this fine day?

Ace and Chazz stopped dueling and greeted the headmaster.

Winduct: Mr Iverson today is the day right...?

Iverson: Yes it is. THat's why I came.

Ace: So is it ready?

Iverson: Yes it is. All we need now is Redgar to begin. By the way where is he?

Winduct: He went to pick up his girlfriend...

Everybody burst out laughing

Chazz: Hahahaha good one Wind! Anyways he went to pick her up. He said he'd be back by noon so he should be arriving any time now.

Iverson: Gosh he is always late for these kind of stuff...


Meanwhile...

Redgar was driving his motorcycle at full speed. Once again he was late. He felt excited as the cold fresh air touched his face. Oh carp he thought I forgot to wear my helmet again. Let's just wish...

Spoiler:

Redgar saw a police car behind him. He stopped the motorcycle immidiately and went off road

Redgar: Here let me help you

He helped his co-rider to get down. He turned to the direction of the police car and saw a familiar face looking at him with his hands crossed n his chest

???: That's the third time I catch you running at high speed. I warned you the last time I am afraid this time I am forced to give you a call.

Redgar: But you know today is the day Aris...We must hurry

Aris's expression lightened. He turned to the woman next to Redgar.

Aris: Good Morning Miss Taylor.

MissTaylor: Hey Aris!

Aris: You both get in the car. I ll take you to the academy.
Redgar: I owe you big time Ari
Aris: How about giving me that Junk Destroyer? It looks kinda intere..
Redgar: No way...
Aris: Meh I had some slight hope. Anyways let's go...

About an hour later in SDA...

Winduct: Annoyaro That Redgar...he is way to late again...
Ace: Relax he is Redgar. He will never be on time.
Chazz: Hahaha true that!

Suddenly they heard a siren from somewhere outside

Spoiler:

Iverson: What is the police doing here?
Chazz: Bits me. Let's go check it out

All 4 of them exited the room and reached the entrance of SDA.

Redgar: Wow here is our welcoming party

Redgar saw 4 faces looking at him straight in the eyes

Redgar: Uhmmm what's up guys?

Iverson/Winduct/Chazz/Ace: YOU ARE LATE AGAIN

Redgar: Aaa yeah about that I saw an old man and I had to help him cross the street...

Chazz: LIAR!!!!!

Iverson: Ari what a pleasant surprise. What are you doing here?
Aris: Greeting everyone. As always Redgar was running quite fast so I had to stop him. Then he told me this is the day so I brought both of them here

Everybody looked at MissTaylor now

MissTaylor: Um hi there guys

Ace: Geez since the day you came back Redgar is always late. I wonder what's keeping him busy...

Everybody started laughing again

Redgar: Shut up!!!!

Iverson: Hahaha anyways we have work to do! Ari thank you for bringing them here but we have to go now. You do what I told you

Aris: Do not worry. I haven't forgotten. Later everyone

Aris entered the car and drifted away from the academy.

Iverson: Now let's get serious.

He turned to MissTaylor

MissTaylor: I know I know. Here

She handed over a card to Iverson.

Iverson: Excellent! Now let's go save Blaze

Redgar: Matteroyo Just wait Blaze! We ll save you


TO BE CONTINUED...

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Chapter 11: The Amazing Mage: Krebons

The figure was moving towards the large corridor. The walls were solely white with paintings all over them. Painting of creatures fighting knights, of princes battling dragons and princess crying from the edge of huge endless towers. He reached the door and pushed it open. He saw what he wanted to see. In the middle of the new room in a large oval shaped table all members of his elite squad were there. All 8 of them. The man reached the table and sat confortably facing all his alies face to face

Man: "I welcome you all and thank you for answering my call"

A figure from somewhere at the back replied. "We live to serve you master. Is something the matter?"

The figure was definately not human. He was large all covered in a gold armor.

Man: "Granmarg my friend I am afraid something is the matter yes"

This time another person replied. He was also huge but was wearing a shiny red armor."What is is master? Just let us take care of it"

Listening to this a third man started laughing. "As if you could take care of something you idiot" This person seemed a little larger than the privous two and wore a chaotic black armor

Red person: "Huh somebody spoke? I must be hearing things"
Black person:" Huh? Want me to beat you up again Thesti?"
Master:" Please do not fight amongst each other. It would be troublsome if you both got injured here"

The two men continued staring at each other before replying" Yes master"

A fourth person covered in a blue armor spoke this time" So what did you want to talk to us about master?"

Master:"I ll get straight to the point. 8 people have invaded our land. Two of them are not a trouble since I told them to come. But the motives of the remaing six are unknown"

The guy in the blue armor spoke again. "All 6 of them move together master?"

Master:"No. They are separated in 3 groups. The first group has three people, the second has two people and the last one is a loner"

"Are they any threat to us?" asked the man named Granmarg

Master:" I doubt they can match our power but bugs should be exterminated upon sight so that they can't multiply."

A man in yellow armor replied" I am willing to take care of them master"

Master:" Good you will go after the group of three. My monitors says they are heading towards Gargoyle Desert. Granmarg I want you to head to the loner. I don't know why but his energy seems to be quite big."

Granmarg:"Yes master"

Master:"Now both of you go"

They stood up and exited the room. The remaining members starting chatting with each other in low voice. After a while two more left and finally three more. The man they called "Master" stood up ready to leave when he noticed one person was still there

It was the person with the blue armor. "Master shall I go after the group of two people?"

Master:"No you don't have to"

Blue person:"But why?"

The master turned and looked at his soldier face to face. He smiled and replied:" I am going after them myself...."

Meanwhile...

Redgar:"Oi oi oi Ruler are we there yet?"

Ruler was really pissed of. It was the 100th time Redgar asked if they were there. That boy is really impatient.

"Not there yet master Redgar. Hang on a little more"

Redgar:"Pff I am bores"

They were all flying on T.Ruler so they could save them sometime. The landscape kept changing as they were reaching closer to the desert. The lakes and the rivers had now vanished and soon all they could see was sand.

Ace:"I guess now we are here"

T.Ruler: "Indeed we are"

Ruler landed and then returned to Winduct's deck to take a rest.

Ace:"Where are we heading now?"

Redgar:"Haha leave it to me the Great Redgar!!!"

"Oh ruler of the garbage bin in front of my house appear now before me and...

Junk Warrior:"Oh hey Redgar you called?"

Redgar:"WHAT???? You should for me to finish my line before you just pop out"

Junk Warrior:"Wha..what?"

Redgar:"Guys tell his how perfect my chant was"

Winduct:"Terrbile"

Ace:"Yeah...terrible"

Redgar's head dropped and he seemed depressed.

Junk Warrior:"So what do you need? And woah it's really hot in here. Are we in a desert?"

Winduct:"We we are. In Gargoyle Desert to be exact"

Junk Warrior:"I see you are still looking for your friend"

Ace:"Yes we are. And we were wondering if you could help us. We don't know where to head now"

Junk Warrior:"Well I would be really glad to help you but I just cannot stand this heat. I am made of metal after all. Sorry ask someone else"

And with that he jumped back to Redgar's deck.

Redgar: "Oh great! My entire deck is made of metallic monsters."
Ace: "Same goes for mine"

Immidiately they both turned to Winduct.

Winduct:"What? You heard Ruler he is tired."

Ace:"Can't you summon some other monster?"

Winduct's jaw dropped

Winduct:"I knew that already..."

Redgar:"Hahaha yeah right"

Winduct: "Ok gimme a second"

He searched his deck for a while before saying "I found it"

Winduct: "Come forth... Krebons"

A tiny juggler appeared out of WInduct's hand. He wore purple clothes and he looked really...bizzare.

Kerbons: Yo ladies and gentlemen? Wassup? Watcha need? Da amazing mage Krebons is in da house! Yeah!!!!

Everyone stared at his strangely

Krebons:" Uhm yo you felas ok?"

Ace:" What is wrong with this guy?"

Redgar:"He gives me the creeps"

Krebons:"Oi oi hold ya tongue kiddos. I can hear to what ya alla sayin 'bout me. And just so ya know I am the amazing mage...KREBONS!!!!

Winduct:"Wrong choice..."
Ace:"Definately..."

Redgar nodded in agreement.

Krebons:"Wa' was dat? You know who I am kiddos? I am da amazing mage...KREBONS!!!"

Winduct:"We get it you told us three times already. Now get serious we need your help. We lost our friend can you help us find him?"

Krebons took a serious face. "It depends"

Redgar:"Depends on what?"

Krebons:"Is your friend some sexy lady with giant boobs? If that's the case then me the amaz...

Redgar punched him

Redgar:"Winduct call another monster before I kill this brat"

Winduct:"Okay okay"

Krebons:"No no no no no wait wait wait. I ll help ya."

Ace:"So where should we go?"

Krebons:"Well the desert is huge but I know an oasis nearby we can start searching from there"

Redgar:"Yosh!!! Let's go

Krebons:"By the way can I ask ya somethin'"

Redgar:"What is it?"

Krebons:"Is your friend like super hot with big boo...

Redgar once again punched him. "Let's go"

Meanwhile...

Both men stopped. In front of them a huge building stood. It seemed almost like a castle.

"So Witch King is this the place?" asked the first man

Witch King:"Yes it is. Finally we made it. Oi Obelisk you better hide"

The ferocius blue creature replied positively and vanished in Witch King's deck.

Witch King:"Now let us go......


To be continued...

Krebons και ξερό ψωμί χαχα
Για να δούμε πιοί ακόμα ταξιδεύουν!

Krebons: Are you like super hot with huge boobs?
Kuriboh: Do Da Lalalalalalalalalalalalalalalalala

Even match!

Congrats redgar - KIU!

Obelisk? Seroulsy? OMFG!

Chapter 12: The Exiled


The creature named Granmarg was riding on a horse in the middle of a deep forest. His master's orders were cleard. Find and exterminate the loner. He kept his pace upfor about an hour and he could clearly feel another presence around. He got off his horse, tied it on a tree and continued on foot. Fifteen minutes later he found what he was looking for.

Granmarg:"Well you must be the man Master is looking for. What is your name human?"

The man made a slight "tss" to show that the appearance of Granmarg annoyed him.

Man:"I am not obligated to answer that question. Now please move aside you are in my way"

Granmarg:"If you want to go through here I am afraid you'll have to get by me first"

The man sighed but said nothing. He reached for his pocket and picked up a card. He activated. A hammering vehicle came forth.

Spoiler:

The man got on the vehicle looking determined

Man:"Looks like I ll have to run through you"

Granmarg gave him a weak smile before replying:"I would like to see you try..."

Meanwhile...

Krebons:"...and then I fought alone against a bunch o' gigantic ugly lookin beasts to save the beautiful princess...."

Krbons was bubbling about his adventures from the time they had started walking. Each one was even more unbelievable than the previous one. He was giving all 3 of them a headache

Redgar:"Don't you ever shut up?"

Krebons turned to his direction:"Please be more respectful young man"

Redgar:"Who are you calling a young man you stupid little creature"

Ace:"Oi Redgar be more gentle. He might be small and stupid and ugly and I want to kill him but he is leading us to were we want to go so shut up"

Redgar:"Meh you're right. Sorry Krebons"

Krebons:"It's Krebons-sama for you boy"

Redgar:"Ok this time I am really going to kill him"

Just as he was roaming at Krebons the desert got wild. A sandstorm brew nearby and almost sucked in Krbons but Redgar was fast enough to grab him bt the leg. As fast as it had appeared the sandstorm vanished

Winduct:"Woah what was that?"

???:"I was that"

They all turned around to see a huge figure facing them with his hands tied across his chest. He seemed like a knight with the golden armor he was wearing.

Redgar:"Who are you?"

Stranger:"Well then where are my manners? I forgot to inroduce myself"

He lowered his hands and the 3 friends saw a huge 6 written across his chest

Stranger:"I am The Exiled Number 6: Kuraz"

He introduced himself as if he was some lord or something. Redgar didn't completely understand who the man was but he had a bad feeling about this

Redgar:"What is your bussines with us?"

Kuraz made a thick noise that Redgar took as a laughter attempt

Kuraz:"Isnt that obvious?"

He paused for a second. "I am here to annhilate you"

Upon listening to these words Krbons escaped Redgar's hands and jumped between them and Kuraz

Krebons:"Yo, what's the big idea nigga? Want me to kick yo ass?"

Kuraz lowered his face and noticed Krebons. He moved his hand close to Krebon's head and hit him with his middle finger. The impact caused by this simple touch was huge as Krebons flew away vanishing in the vast endless desert.

Kuraz:"Man, don't tell me that weak thing was your guardian?"

Winduct:"You...what did you do to Krebons?"

Kuraz:"That is nothing in front of the full extent of my powers.Now hurry and bring out your guardians I need to kill you fast If I want to have time for dinner with the others"

Redgar seemed furious. He jumped ahead and released Junk Warrior and Junk Archer at the same time.

Redgar:"Guys...take out the trash for me"

Warrior/Archer:"Leave it to us Redgar"

Meanwhile...

The man had managed to escaped that knight with the brown armor. Who the hell was he? he thought. He sat next to a river and drunk some water. As he tried to got up he saw an image in the water trying to stab him with a sword. On instinct he jumped to the side and avoided the sword at the last minute. The masked knight was back

Man:"You...what is your name and what is your bussiness with me?"

Granmarg lowered his sword. The man saw an 8 drawn in his right arm

Granmarg:"The Exiled Number 8: Granmarg

The man looked confused.

Man:"The Exiled? What is this? And what is that number? What does it represent?"

Granmarg:"Well I guess I shall tell you. You won't live long either way. The Exiled is an organization formed by the Master. Our purpose is to defeat The Sacred Ones and rule this world. The number on my shoulder represents my rank among the officers.I am the lowest officer Number 8. You guessed right there are 8 officers working under the Master. He calls us Monarchs"

That seems familiar actually. Arent there cards named Monarchs? And Granmarg is one of them. All these thoughts crossed the man's mind upon hearing the story Granmarg told him

Man:"And why do you have to kill me?"

Granmarg:"Because you are a human. Humen tend to cooperate his The Sacred Ones. And because my master has actually open bussiness with you."

Man:"Does that mean your master knows me personally?"

Granmarg:"Figure this out yourself. I wouldn't ask but I would like to know the name of the man I kill so please could you share it with me?"

Man:"Yeah sure it would be rude not to know the name of the man who killed you Granmarg the Monarch. My name is Aris Samaras..."

Meanwhile...

Junk Warrior:"Take this: JUNK FIST"

Kuraz easily avoided Junk Warrior's pnch bfore catching one of the Archer's arrow with his bare hands.

Kuraz: LIGHTNING STRIKE

A shiny bolt lept from Kuraz's hand and hit Junk Warrior head on sending him a couple of meters behind

Junk Archer:"Oi brother are you ok?

Kuraz:"You don't have time to look away"

He punched Junk Archer sending him a few meters flying as well. Archer managed to keep his balance though. He started firing arrows at Kuraz once again but Kuraz evaded all of them with ease

Kuraz:"Is that all you can do?"

Ace:"Well no!!! Come forth 3x Batterymen AA. Hurry up help Junk Archer"

The 3 creatures rushed at Kuraz

AA1:" Let's do that attack"

The two other creatures nodded

The quickly surrounded Kuraz.

AA1/AA2/AA3:"WRAP ATTACK"

Shiny metalic nets came flying through the chests of all three AA's. With the speed of light they captured Kuraz, in an invisible vey powerful web

Winduct:"My turn. Go Thought Ruler Archfiend. Toast him for me please"

T.Ruler:"Yes Master"

He opened his mouth and fired a fireball at him. Just before the fireball hit Kuraz head on Redgar would have swore he had seen him smile between his thick golden armor...

To be continued...

Chapter 13: KURAZ VS JUNK DESTROYER

Iverson had just finished his conversation with Chaos and was on his way to the infirmary to check on Chazz and MissTaylor. I hope they are ok he thought. He heard a voice greeting him from behind. It was nurse Joey

Joey: "Hey headmaster. Are you going to pay a visit to the patients?"

Iverson: " Oh hello Nurse Joey. Yes indeed I am. Are they doing ok?"

Joey: "I dont know I was going to check on them now"

Iverson: " Well let's go then"

They both started walking together towards the infirmary. Iverson couldn't help but notice how pretty Nurse Joey looked

Joey: "Is something the matter headmaster?"

Iverson: "Uhm no no everything is fine"

Damt I must hold myself together. What's wrong with me. Joey wet ahead and opened the door. Iveson entered just behind her

Joey: "Headmaster we havea problem"

Iverson: "What is it?"

Joey: "The patietns...are gone"

Meanwhile...

" And that's the story"

The man seemed puzzled. The story he just heard was weird as hell.

Man: "Well I really don't get it Seto. Why would Vem do something like that?"

Seto: " I dont know but next time he does something like this he is dead"

Man: "Calm down. I ll call a meeting with all the TSO members so we can work this out. I was already planning a meeting since Shock is forming an army. We need to be ready for battle at any time."

Seto: " I shall inform the rest of them now. Give me a sec"

The man crossed his arms. Bizzare thing are happening lately. I wonder what's going on. And who were the humen Seto faced?

About 10 minutes later Seto returned quite upset

Man: "What is is Seto?"

Seto: "Steff and Vem are nowhere to be seen"

Man: " I see. Never mind we ll hold a meeting without them"

10 minutes later 10 men were sitting around a big round table. Other seemed serious other nervous and few of them even bored

???: "Oi Seto what's this meeting about?"

Seto: " It serves multiple purposes Fudo. First of all I wanted to talk about Vem's strange behavior towards me."

Pegasus: " Don't be so upset Kaiba-boy he was just doing his job. Those kids were once his friends. Try to get in his shoes for a second. "

Kaiba: "He could have told me that. But instead he gave me no explanation"

They guy named Fudo spoke again: "I do not blame him. I would have done the same thing"

Fudo was tall with spiky black hair. He seemed lost in his thoughs

Keith: " Are you morons? We have Shock preparing to crush us with his army and you fight among each other?"

Kaiba: "We are just talking Keith"

Keith: "Whatever..."

The guy next to Fudo raised his head. He had long blonde hair and two ear pearcings. "What I would like to know is where exacly is No. 11 and No. 12"

The man that seemed to be the leader responded " Be more kind Jack. They have names"

Jack: " I do not think they deserve to be called by their names yet"

???: " And why is that?"

Everybody turned to the point from where the voice was heard. A single man was standing there. He spoke in high clear voice: " I am here to answer all your questions about my behavior"

The man was Vem.

Meanwhile...

Kuraz: "Pff that's all you ve got?"

Flashback:

Spoiler:

Kuraz: "You guardians are weak. You know why is that? Guardians have their own unique attacks and physical strngth. But their mental strength comes from the power of the master. If you are weak then your guardians will be mentally weak as well. Now please die"

He shot a beam against Ace. The beam hit him in the chest. He was ready to shoot against WInduct when..

Redgar: "STOOOOOOOOOOOP"

Kuraz raised his eyebrows against him.

Kuraz: " What do you want boy? You want me to kill you first?"

Redgar: " I am the one who ll kill you"

Redgar looked at his blue bar. It was almost at the middle. He picked a card from his deck

Redgar: " Come forth JUNK DESTROYER"

A gigantic machine monster arose between the 3 of them and Kuraz. He looked majestic under the hot sun.

Junk Destroyer: " You must be Redgar. Nice to meet you. I know why you called. Leave it to me"

Redgar nodded

Junk Destroyer took a single step to get closer to Kuraz

Kuraz: "What? You re my next opponent? You look scary. I am scared. What should I do...just kidding"

He leapt in front and raised a golden sword from his belt and thrusted it at Junk Destroyer. Destroyer extended his arm and shielded against the sword. He started counterattacking with fast ferocius punches. The battle roamed on and soon Redgar couldnt follow with their movements.

Kuraz: "Not half bad. But this is still not my full strength"

J. Destroyer said nothing. He once again charged at Kuraz. Kuraz flashed a smile. A second later Redgar show them standing the back to back. The final strike has been given. The mattter is who gave it. With no warning Junk Destroyer collapsed.

Kuraz: "Weak"

Redgar was hopeless now. His blue bar was almost out since he had summoned 2 monsters and his guardian at the same time. Ace and Winduct were unconsious. What could he do?
Kuraz was coming all and closer.

Kuraz: "It's over boy"

He approached Redgar and raised his sword. Redgar closed his eyes

Kuraz: "DIE!!!"

*slash*

To be continued ...

Chapter 14: THE TRUTH


Redgar had his eyes closed. He was sure he heard a sword slash but he didnt feel any pain He slowly opened his eyes...

Kuraz: "Wh...what?"

What Redgar saw shocked him. A black sword had pierced Kuraz from behind. Kuraz was hardly breathing.

Kuraz: "Who...who did this?"

Redgar looked behind Kuraz. He saw a warrior in black and purple armor pulling his black sword out of Kuraz. He heard a voice behind the warrior


Voice: "Good job Garoth!"

Garoth: "It was nothing master"

Voice: "Now who you might be? And why did you attack those boys?"

Redgar realised Kuraz had lost his coolness for the first time. He seemed in too much pain to be talking.

Kuraz: "You...I will kill you..."

He gathered all his strength and charged at the knight. Suddenly a red figure appeared between Kuraz and the knight

Figure: "Kuraz that's enough"

The red figure grabbed Kuraz and with a flash of an eye both of them were gone. Redgar got up and approached the man who saved them

Redgar: "You again..."

It was Sin. He had his long hair caught in a horsetail behind his back.

Sin: "Hello again Redgar. Glad we made it in time"

Voice: "Yeah one second later and you would be dead brother"

Redgar: "Steff..."

Steff: " Come on be at least a bit grateful here. We saved your life"

Redgar: "Who asked you to do that? I said the next time I ll see you I'd kill you. Come forth Junk Warrior"

Redgar's heart hit in a large slow tone once. Redgar kneeled in pain.

Steff: "Don't overdo it. Both your bars are almost out. You will die if you don't get some rest. Sin go pick up the other two. It's time to have a conversation with the entire group."

Sin: "Got it Steff. Garoth take Winduct I ll take Ace"

Garoth: "Which one is Winduct?"

Sin pointed at Winduct. "That one"

Garoth: "Understood"

Steff: " Ok Redgar I ll carry you to a safer place and explain everything to you over there. If you are not satisfied whith what you hear I will allow you to kill me again. What do you say?"

Redgar said nothing but nodded in agreement.

Meanwhile...

Pegasus: "Vemu-boy what a pleasant surprise. I think we all here want to hear what you have to say"

Kaiba: "Exactly. And where is Steff?"

Vem ignored those two and turned to the leader. "Shall I speak?"

The leader scanned him with his eyes before replying "Go ahead"

Vem took a big breath and began

"Well as you know I came here only recently. Wich means I was in the real world not too much ago. Well several things have happened there during the last 2,5 years. Basically me and my men were chasing after my current partner Steff. Well truth to be told we weren't actually chasing him. We were cooperating with him. The real enemy, our common enemy, was Shock. He was the mastermind behind all the things that happened during these two years. Everything was a part of his plan."

Keith interrupter Vem: "And what exactly was his plan?"

Vem: "I will get to that. He originally wanted to create a device to bring himself here. So he used Steff as a decoy to get his hands on the two best reaserchers avaliable. Their names are Terraplant and Iverson. His plan was a succes. 2,5 years ago he managed to get his hands on an unconsious Iverson. I believe he had methods to absorb his knowledge. Afer doing that he continued to act as if he was just a pwn controlled by Steff. And when he got the opportunity in a tag duel against Terraplant and a man named Blaze he used the device he had created on Blaze to see if it worked. It did perfectly. After that he trasported himself here and his real plan began."

Leader: "And may I ask Alastor what his real plan is?"

Vem: " Well I am not so sure about that myself but I believe he wants to get his hands on the guardians of all TSO members to create an ultimate army and with that army invade and conquer the real world."

Kaiba didnt seem to be persuaded: "And how do you know all these things?"

Vem: "Well that is simple. You see Steff, wasn't my enemy at the real world. Me and him...we were alies..."

Meanwhile...

Redgar, Ace and Winduct couldnt believe the things they had just heard.

Redgar: "You and Vem alies????? Since when?"

Steff: "Since the beggining. When I first sent MissTaylor to SDA and took Ace."

Redgar: "But how? It doesnt make any sense...you KILLED so many innocent people"

Steff: "You are worng. Svstar and Teise were killed by Shock. Mysterious was shot by orders from Shock as well. But I said nothing at that point because the whole plan would be ruined. So I just played along. I didnt have any choice."

Redgar: "Still Vem and our brother Synchrowarrior were killed by you. You cannot deny that."

Steff: "Yet you dont understand. Redgar both Synchrowarrior and Vem never died..."

All 3 of them were left speechless

Winduct: "Dont be stupid. We saw their dead bodies.

Steff: "Yes you did because that's what we wanted you to see. Vem played half-dead before Redgar at the infrrmay and handed him the Mooryan Curry card. Didnt you find it weird that the Mooryan Curry can ressurect people?"

Redgar: "You can't mean that..."

Steff: "Exactly. Vem was never ressurected. Mooryan Curry is a powerful card indeed but it cannot ressurect people. Your conversation with Vem's wife was also a part of our plan to make you believe I can ressurect the dead Vem without making you understand he is till alive. Vem never died to begin with"

Redgar: "And how is he here now?"

Steff: "The same way you are. We created a machine about 2 years ago that was capable to transfer us here"

Redgar: "Still I dont get it. At that war DGA vs SDA you ordered your men to kill Synchrowarrior. And then later we found him dead. How can you explain this?"

Steff: "The DGA vs SDA war was all just part of mine Vem's and S/Warrior's plan. We wanted to see if Shock would attempt to use his device there. And we succeded although we had casualties. And S/Warrior also never died. The letter you found with the cards was just so that he could give you the cards.

Redgar: "But we SAW his dead body. We buried him for god's shake"

Steff: "Well that was the biggest risk we took so far. You remember I told you that we had a trasporter to come here?"

Redgar: "Yes"

Steff: "Well in S/Warrior's case we just trnsported his soul here without his body. We still do not know if it succeded or not since we haven't found S/Warrior yet."

Redgar couldnt believe a thing Steff said. "But why go through all that trouble?"

Steff: "To prevent Shock from realising he was cornered."

Redgar: "But if Shock really was cornered why did he still came here and gathered an army?"

Steff: "That's becuase something ruined our plans"

Redgar: "And what was it?"

Steff took a deep breath

Steff: "My death. The fact you killed me maybe seemed heroic to you but it stopped our plans and Shock managed to fullfil his plan with nothing blocking his way...."

Redgar was speechless. All the trouble he went through during these 2,5 years was for nothing. Everything he ever believed to was just shuttered.

Winduct: "Redgar I know it's hard to believe but he has no reason to lie to us to this extent. If he really wanted to kill us he could have done it when we were half-dead. But instead of that he saved us. That must mean that he is telling the truth"

Ace: "I ll agree with Winduct on this one. But I still have a question. Since your bussiness was with SDA and Vem why did you send your men at DGA as well?"

Steff looked puzzled now. "I didnt send anyone to DGA. If you are talking about Scorpion and Vongola they were just helping us catch Shock since they felt it was their duty cause Shock was once a student of DGA."

Ace: "But when we payed a visit at DGA 2 of your men were in charge plus this guy named Doe dueled us and when he lost he vanished with that weird device"

Steff looked even more puzzled: " I really dont know what you are talking about Ace"

Winduct: "Oh crap I think I understand. If Steff didnt send Doe over there then the one who did it must have been..."

Sin/Steff/Ace/Winduct: SHOCK!!!


To be continued...

Chapter 15: DESICIONS


Redgar: "I am still confused. Terra used his device to kill the "Ressurected" Vem. How can it...?"

Steff: "You really don't get it? The device never worked. The time Terra used the device Vem used his one device and transferred to this world. The rest were just visual effects Redgar"

Redgar: "Let's say I belieeve all these nonsense. Who else was in the plan?"

Steff pointed at Sin. "Only he was. The rest were my "subordinates" to fullfill me evil plan"

Redgar's head hurt. All this was too much for him. He lied back on the couch and tried to relax. Mystirious's face kept poping up in his head.

Winduct: " As I see it now Shock isn't our only threat. The guy who attacked us said he was Number 6 out of an 8 man squad. That means he was one of the weakest and yet he totally defeated us. And on top he escaped and we lost Krebons. What are we going to do?"

Steff: "One thing at a time. First of all let me explain the situation. Shock's elite squad is called The Exiled Ones. The one you faced was indeed Number 6: Kuraz. So these are our enemies. I believe you know about the Sacred Ones?"

Ace: "Yeah we bumped into two of them back at the Trunade Jungle. One of them was Pegasus the game creator himself. The other one was some american dude his name was Keith I think."

Steff: "They are the weakest in terms of strength among the TSO's. Right now as we speak Vem is trying to get the TSO's to help us defeat the Exiled Ones"

Winduct: "I hope he can make it"

Redgar suddenly got up from the couch he was sitting and grabbed Steff's arm.

Redgar: "Is there a way for me to become stronger?"

Steff seemed surprised.

Steff: "I guess I could teach you how to fight in this new enviroment and using your bars yes"

Redgar: "Please brother...teach me"

Meanwhile...

Vem stopped talking and looked around. He realised everyone was staring at him. The man that seemed to be the leader spoke again.

Leader: "You made some good points Alastor. Now it's time to vote if we will agree to your statements or not. I vote Agree. Now let's proceed to the rest of the members.

Kaiba stood up and shouted. "I still hate you but I will agree."

The man named Fudo also agreed and so did the man named Jack.

Pegasus: "I always liked your style Vemu-boy. I ll agree to this as well"

Keith: "Damn looks like I aint got a choice here"

Leader: "Well 6 votes already so no reason to keep asking. Vem we will help you and your friends defeat Shock and his army"

Vem smiled, a smile of relief

Meanwhile...

Steff: "He have no time to waste. I will stay here with Redgar so I can train him. You guys go continue your search for Blaze. Sin will accompany you."

Winduct: "Woah woah wait wait. I have to find Krebons first"

Steff: "Oh yeah your creature right?"

Winduct: "Yes"

Sin interupted them" In that case. Shine brightlly and show the way... LYLA DARKSWRON SORCERESS"

A black dressed woman appearead in front of them. She was holding a staff and had long black hair

Lyla: "Master Sin, is everything ok? Why have I been summoned?"

Sin: "Hey Lyla. Meet Redgar, Ace and WInduct"

The three boys nodded

Sin: "Lisen I want you to escort Winduct in the Gargoyle desert and help him find his friend Krebons. Could you do that for me?"

Lyla: "Yes of course dont be syupid. WInduct I am ready to leave whenever you want"

Winduct: "Steff is there anything else I need to know before I leave?"

Steff: "Just 1 thing. If you meet any of The Exiled dont fight. Just run, Lyla will protect you and give you time to escape"

Winduct nodded. He and Lyla exited the house and after a few minutes they vanished in the horizon.

Sin: "So Ace it's time for us to go and save Blaze"

Ace: "But I want to train as well"

Sin: "Do not worry I will teach you how to control your bars on the way"

Ace: "Well then Steff, Redgar this is goodbye! Good luck and don't do something stupid Redgar"

Redgar: "I won't Ace. Be careful"

Sin: "Later!"

And so Ace and Sin left leaving Redgar and Steff alone

Steff: "So brother, time for the training to begin..."

Meanwhile...

The two men reached the gigantic entrance of the fortress

Panos: "So what now? We ring and they answer?"

Just upon finishing his sentence the doors opened. A man that seemed like a servant approached them. He seemed to be really old. Just a few black hair were still on the top of his head. He was wearing gold glasses featuring his green eyes. He was wearing gloves and was holding a rattan in his right hand.

Man: "Well hello there. Who might you be?"

W.King: "My name is Witch King, your master is waiting for me"

Man: "Oh we ve been expecting you sir. Welcome to our manner. Master isn't here right now but If you need anything don't hesitate to ask. Please come inside"

The two men entered and the gates closed behind them. They followed the old man inside the huge corridors of the castle. The man went up some stairs and stopped outside a door, knocking twice. A tall figure opened the door. He was covered in ferocious Blue armor. Witch King noticed that in the figure's left arm the number "4" written with large black letters.

Blue Figure: "Hello Leon. What brings you here?"

Leon: "Sorry for disturbing you Mobius-sama. The two guests we ve been expecting have arrived and I thought you may want to greet them since master is out"

The man named Mobius just noticed the two men. "Oh how rude of me gentlemen I didn't see you. You can go Leon I will take care of our guests"

The man named Leon bowed and then silently left.

Mobius: "Well my name is Mobius gentlemen and what are your names?"

W.King: "Witch King"
Panos: "Kauko"

Mobius: "Nice to meet you. Now please don't sit there please come in"


Meanwhile...

The man everyone called master suddenly stopped. In front of him he saw what he wanted. The two people that had invaded

Man: "Evening fellas"

To be continued...

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@sin: πολυ καιρο το ετοιμαζα το twist. Παλι ομως δεν με πολυικανοποιησε. Well anyways

Chapter 16: KREBONS IS BACK!!!


Iverson and Nurse Joey had searched everywhere but Chazz and MissTaylor were nowhere to be seen.

Iverson: "Where could those two have gone? I ll contact Terraplant you keep searching nurse"

Joey: "Yessir"

Iverson exited the infirmary and hurried back to his office. He picked up the phone and dialed Terra's number. Terra's loud voice was heard after a couple of rings.

Terra: "Mushi mushi"

Iverson: "Hey Terra, Iverson here"

Terra: "Hello headmaster, what do you need?"

Iverson: "Chazz and MissTaylor have gone missing, do you know anything about this?"

Terra: "Missing? No sorry I don't know anything about this. Weren't they both injured?"

Iverson: "They were...that's what worries me"

Terra: "Give me a second"

After a short while Terra spoke again this time his voice was anxious

Terra: "I found them sir. You wont like this"

Iverson: "Where are they?"

Meanwhile in the "other" world...

The man everyone called master smiled and approached the two people even more

Master: "Well well well I see some familiar faces here. It's been a long time...Misstaylor"

MissTaylor looked at the man with pure hate in her eyes: "Shock..."

Shock clapped his hands. "Good, good you remember my name now we ll save time by skipping the introductions. And who you might be young man?"

"Name's Chazz knucklehead. Now move, you are in our way."

Shock: "In your way? I am afraid that was my purpose of coming here. To get IN YOUR WAY"

Chazz sighed and extended his arm in front of MissTaylor. "Stay back I ll take care of him"

MissTaylor: "Chazz NO he is too str..."

Chazz: "Just stand back." "COME FORTH DARK ARMED DRAGON"

A ferocius black dragon came descnding out of Chazz's card. "GO buddy take care of this guy for me!"

DAD: "No problem"

DAD charged at Shock and breathed a fireball right at him. While remaining calm Shock activated on of his cards. A huge explosion was caused by DAD's fireball, and smoke was emitted all over the place. When the smoke cleared Shock seemed to not having move an inch. A jelly pink thing was in front of him. "Nice job Marshamallon. Now please take care of this kid dragon". The jelly thing nodded and jumped at DAD. It grabbed his throat and with a small "puff" it exploded sending DAD flying several meters

Chazz: "DARK ARMED DRAGOOOOOON. You...what have you done?"

Shock seemed surprised. "Who me? I just defended myself. Now come with me and nobody will get hurt...."

Meanwhile...

Winduct: "So Lyla, tell me more about Sin. I mean, his character"

Lyla seemed puzzled with Winduct's question

Lyla: "Well I don't know much really, this is the first time he summons me but he is a nice master. I'd gladly die for him."

Winduct: "I see. So what makes you feel this way?"

Lyla thought about it for a bit. "I think it's the bond created between us. I know he would die to protect us all, and we would gladly do the same. It's a bond of trust and I believe it's nessescary to trust your companion in order to create a healthy relationship"

Winduct: "Wow thanks. That really helped"

Lyla smiled and nodded. They contnued walking for about an hour when they finally show the dessert in front of them.

Lyla: "Well call forth your guardian so he can locate Krebons"

Winduct: "Wait what? How can Ruler locate Krebons?"

Lyla seemed confused. "You don't know?"

Winduct nodded negatively

Lyla: "Creatures that share the master and the same deck are called familiars. Familiars are able o locate their fellow familiars by sensing their energy. I thought you knew that."

Winduct: "How should I know that? Ruler never mentioned something like this"

Lyla: "Hmm weird. Anyways call him to ask for his help"

Winduct reached for a card and activated. Ruler came out still looking a bit pale after the last battle.

Ruler: "Master Winduct you need something?"

Winduct: "Hey Ruler. Yeah I was wondering is you can tell me where Krebons is"

Ruler seemed puzzled. "How should I know where he is? Wasnt he blasted away by Kuraz?"

Winduct: "Well Lyla here said something about feeling his enrgy"

Ruler just noticed Lyla standing there.

Ruler: "Forgive my master's rudeness, beatiful lady my name is Thought Ruler or Ruler for friends. And yours?"

Lyla: "Lyla my name dragon. Nice to meet you"

Ruler seemed to flush

Oh great Ruler is in love thought Winduct

WInduct: "So back in our topic can you f...what the..?"

Ruler was totally ignoring Winduct and he was chatting with Lyla.

Winduct: "RULEEEEER"

Ruler didnt seem to notice Winduct's screaming and continued his conversation.

Lyla: "Oi dragon. Your master is calling for you"

Ruler: "Oh he is? What is it Winduct?"

Winduct: "DOn't you ever ignore me again Ruler"

Ruler nodded apologeticly.

Lyla: "Dragon, since you and Krebons are from the same deck and serve under the same master you should be able to feel his energy. Now try concetrating on him"

Ruler: "Yes milady"

Ruler closed his eyes and said nothing for a while. After almost a minute he opened his eyes. "I found him. Follow me"

Not a while later they found themselves in a dead end foul of sand.

Ruler: "He is here"

Lyla: "Let's look for him"

They started searching around under every stone and every grass shouting "Krebons".

Finally after a while they saw 2 legs standing out of the sand. WInduct rushed over and pulled Krebons out

Krebons: "Woah, nigga who you pulling out?"

Winduct: "Shut up it's me"

Krebons looked at Winduct confused. "And who da hell are yo-ou?"

WInduct: "Are you kidding me? I am your master!"

Krebons: "No shit! Long time no see....uhm...uhm what was yo-ou name again?"

Winduct punched Krebons."Winduct"

Krebons: "OUCH. Not cool bro"

Lyla: "Good now that we found him let's get outta here"

???: "I don't think so"

They all leaned towards the place where the mysterious voice was heard from. There 2 dragons were standing high and mighty. One was deep black and the other lught purple.

Dragon 1: "Your little trip ends here human. We'll make you pay for what you did to Lord Kuraz...

Meanwhile...

Aris's GB Laquari had finally managed to wound Granmarg seriously.

Aris: "Well excuse me now Granmarg the monarch but I ll be taking my leave."

Granmarg: "You..win this time human...but be sure I won't let you go next time."

Just as suddenly as he had appeared the monarch dissapeared.

Laquari: "Woah that was a tough bastard. I need a rest master. See ya later"

Aris: "Sure go ahead. Good job"

Aris reached for the river and watered his face. I wonder how the others are doing...

To be continued...

Chapter 17: The Dragon Brothers vs Winduct

Iverson couldn't believe had Terra had told him. He was running at full speed at his lab to confirm.

Flashback:

Spoiler:

With a light *crack* the lab's door opened. Everything seemed as Iverson left it. No signs of the device having been used by anyone. He reached for the computer to examine the data. There it was. The deviced was last used 2 minutes ago. That could mean one thing. Chazz and MissTaylor really did go to the other dimension...


Meanwhile in the "Other" world...

Winduct: "Who are you? What is your bussiness with us?"

Dragon1: "My name is Light Pulsar Dragon and my friend here is Solar Flare Dragon. We are Master Kuraz's elite soldiers and we came here to avennge him. How dare you injure him human? NO PAY"

The Dragon charged at him at full speed. Lyla rushed in front of WInduct and with a wave of her wand she created a spirit barrier. Winduct didnt waste any time and ordered Ruler to attack. Despite looking weakened from the previous fight Ruler charged at the dragons.

Krebons: "Go go go go let's f**k those bastards"

Krebons was standing on the back of Ruler and seemed ready for combat. Light Pulsar Dragon(LPD) came soaring at them while Solar Flare Dragon(SFD) went to deal with Lyla and Winduct.

Just as LPD reached Ruler and began fighting him Krebons jumped off Ruler and landed on LPD's back. He started delivering punches at him. LPD didnt even noticed him and kept fighting with Ruler. Meanwhile Lyla was casting various spells at SFD but he kept dodging them. He launched a huge fireball only to be shielded by another of Lyla's barriers. Winduct couldnt just sit there watching so he looked up his deck till he found what he needed. The card was Psychic Trigger. He activated it and saw a laser taking shark and bones and appearing in his hands.

Winduct: "Sweet"

His blue bar was at 65% so it was ok. He opened fire at SFD but the dragon was very fast despite his heavy build and easily avoided the shots. He launched a fireball at Winduct, but one of WInduct's shot hit it mid air causing an explosion. Ruler hearing the explosion turned at that direction for a mere second and LPD took the chance to put his claws deep in Ruler's flesh. Ruler screamed in pain. LPD delivered a final kick at him and Ruler flew several meters before landing on some nearby rocks. LPD turned hi head aroung and noticed Krebons on his back.

Krebons: "Yo"

LPD flew up high and as he was at top height he started descending at ferocius speed

Krebons: "ARE YOU IDIOT YOU ARE GOING TO KILL ME"

LPD smiled and just before he hit the ground he turned around leaving Krebons to fall on the ground. Having Ruler and Krebons defeated LPD landed right next to SFD.

LDP: "What's taking you so long brother?"

SFD: "That woman keeps blocking my attackes with her barriers"

LPD: "I ll handle her you take care of the kid"

Winduct: "What did you do to Ruler and Krebons?"

SFD: "You ll join them soon enough"

Wiothout a warning SFD charged at Winduct. Wincudt started firing the laser he was holding blindly in the hopes of actually hitting him. SFD launched fireball and this time WInduct wasnt lucky enough to avoid it. THe fireball hit him heads up sending him flying. Meanwhile Lyla was struggling against LPD but managed to hold him off. Suddenly SFD came at her from the left side delivering a fatal blow at here

Lyla: "I am sorry master"

Lyla vanished in thin air.

LDP: "That was weak. I thought these guys would be a challenge"

SFD: "Beats me. That's what I thought as well"

Winduct couldnt move. He looket at his red bar and saw it was almost empty. At this rate I ll really die he thought. He could barely see the two dragons coming his way. Suddenly he heard a voice

Voice: "Well aren't you messed up now...Windy-boy?"

Winduct: "Y...y...ou.."

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Meanwhile...

Shock rang the bell of his manor. Leon opened the door and greeted him. He informed him his two guests have arrived.

Shock: "Excellent. Leon please take care of these two for me while I attend to our visitors"

Leon: "Yes master"

Leon picked up the two bodies Shock was carrying and took the stairs to one of the mansion's upper floors. Leon told Shock the guests were at Mobiu's place so he headed straight to that place.

*Knock knock*

A couple of days later...

To be continued...

CHAPTER 18: THE LEADER OF THE SACRED ONES

Winduct slowly regained his conciousness. He opened his eyes slowly so he could adapt to the light around him. Where am I, he thought. He looked aroung and realised he was in a hospital-looking room. He suddenly remembered his battle with the dragons and jumped. A voice nearby advised him to stop

Voice: "Slow down Winduct your injuries haven't fully healed yet."

Winduct knew this voice. He turned around and saw the man he expected to see: "Vem"

"Yes,yes. At your service" Vem said with a smile on his face. "You had us worried then for a second".

Winduct: "Wha..what happened to the dragons?"

Vem: "Relax. One thing at a time. But do not wory they have been taken care of"

Winduct sighed relieved and lied back in his been."How long have I been like this?"

Vem: "One week."

"Wow I must have missed lots of things." said Winduct

Vem: "Do not worry. We will fill you in. What you need to do now though is rest. We will need you in top shape for the upcoming battles to come."

Winduct seemed sceptical.

Vem: "What are you thinking about?"

Winduct: "You know, when they attacked us I thought I was strong enough to fend them of. I thought I could protect my friends. But it turned out I was weak. That's why I am sking this as a favor headmaster. Please train me."

Vem shook his head. "Looks like I have no other choice."

Winduct smiled and closed his eyes once again...

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Winduct and Vem were walking down the hallway of the huge building heading for the conference room. Winduct fell well rested and ready for anything. Vem told him that the TSO were going to discuss battle strategy today. He insisted on coming along and Vem was forced to allow him to come. They reached a dark door at the end of the corridor and it opened with a low "crack". Upon entering Winduct saw several figures sitting there, others chatting with each other other just relaxing and others messing with their cards. Upon their entrance though everybody in the room was doing the same thing. Staring at them. Winduct felt embarassed so he turned his face elsewhere.

The man in the center of the room spoke with slow loud voice:"Alastor, is this the boy that Maximilian and Bandit brought back?"

Vem: "Yes indeed it is"

The man got up and approached Winduct. He extended his arm and greeted WInduct.

Man: "Welcome among us young man. My name is yugi Muto and I am the leader of the TSO"

WInduct was left with his mouth open. The strongest duelist to ever walk on earth was asking for his name. His words were stuck in his throat. "My name is Winduct sir, it's an honour to meet you."

Yugi offered them a seat and then returned to his spot. One by one all the TSO members introduced themselves and all of them were duelists so strong Winduct had only heard of them through stories.

Yugi: "Ok. Now that the introductions are over Maximilian could you please fill us in about your battle with Kuraz's soldiers?"

Pegasus stood up and started talking:

"Well actually we managed to get there in time thanks to Vemu-boy. He told us to go there to scout the area but I am sure he knew that Windy-boy was there fighting for his life."

He paused for a second and everybody looked at Vem. He nodded in agreement to what Pegasus said. Pegasus resumed:

"Keith secured them and I went on to fight the dragons. They weren't that strong, definately not at Exiled level, and we managed to defeat them withouht any serious injuries. We then returned here and gave Windy-boy first aid treatment"

Yugi seemed sceptical."Did you manage to identify who they were?"

Pegasus nodded negatively.

Winduct gathered his courage and raised his hand.Some of the members started laughing.

Yugi: "You dont have to raise your hand Winduct. This isnt school. Now tell us what is it you want to share with us?"

Winduct: "Those two dragons were Kuraz's soliders. They said they came to avenge their master."

A man made a "Ha" before saying: "His familiards huh? Well he should have picked stronger servants"

Yugi heard him but said nothing. "Well now that all of us are here and we know as much as we can about our opponents I think it's time to take action. We will divide into 3 groups and assault Shock's manor. My scout has revealed it's location so we know where to go.

Vem: "Excuse me sir, could I stay behind to train Winduct for a bit? We ll catch up later"

Yugi agreed. "Dont take too long though the battles won't be easy"

Yugi: "Ok Seto,Maximilian and Bandit you will be group number 1, Fudo,Jack and me will be group 2 and the 4 of you(he pointed at the remaining 4 members) will be group 3. Now about how and where we strike I ll let you know later today. Dismissed...

Meanwhile...

Shock closed his phone and sighed. As he suspected there waqs a spy among his men. He wrotte down the names of his men one by one and started crossing them out one by one. In the end only 3 names were left:

Witch King
Panos
John_Doe

Now who could be the spy he thought. He picked up his phone again. As soon as he heard a voice answering he said: "Prepare an emergency meeting with ALL my Loutenant's.

The voice replied: "Yessir"

To be continued...

Chapter 19: The Battle Begins


Shock entered the conference room. All the exiled members were there. He also saw Panos and Witch King in the far left corner, his servant Leon was standing next to him and John_Doe was sitting sceptical3 spots to the right. Shock began speaking.


"My fellow men I have some bad news to share with you. One of us is a spy of the TSO."

Everybody started looking at each other and wishpering between them. Shock saw that Panos was rather uneasy, Witch King made a little *sigh* and John Doe was pathetically uninterested in the matter.

Mobius: "Master, that is a huge accusation are you sure about this?"

Shock: "I am sure Mobius yes. Now my friend Doe what do you think? Who is the spy?"

Dpe raised his eyebrow and looked Shock in the eyes. " No clue"

Shock: "Could it be you?"

Doe: "Are you an idiot? You think If I were the spy I would tell you?"

A man in gray armor go up and caught Doe by the throat. "Watch your mouth before the master worm"

Shock: "Delg relax. Let him go"

The man named Delg let go of Doe and returned to his seat.

Shock: "I might not know who the spy is but I will say this one thing to him. Wish that I dont find you. Cause if I do note even all the TSO together could save you from my wrath."

Everyone except Doe nodded.

Mobius: "Master, what are we going to do about the attack of the TSO?"

Shock seemed surprised to hear the question but kept his calm. "We will fortify ourselves of course. Witch King,Panos and Granmarg will guard the rare entrance, Kuraz,Thestalos and Caius will guard the back entrance, Me,Leon and Mobius will guard the front and the rest of you (he pointed at the remaining members) will be kept hidden until I order an attack"

Everyone nodded


Shock: "Now everyone go! Let's begin the preparations."

Meanwhile...

Winduct was following Vem for about a quarter of an hour now. Finally they reached their destination. It was an enormous circular room with no roof. The walls were painted white. The place looked...bizzare

Winduct: "What is this place?"

Vem: "It is a place specifically created for learning how to control your familiars"

Winduct seemed sceptical.

Vem: "Are you ready?"

Winduct: "As ready as I ll ever be"

Vem: "Well then, let's get the show on the road"

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SEVERAL DAYS LATER...

The ten men where standing in front of the huge building. The man named Yugi spoke

"Alright everyone we finally made it here. Now do not fear and fight valiently. For every man there is a cause he would gladly die for. Defend the right to have a place to wich he can belong to. And every man will fight with his bare hands in desperation, and shed his blood, to spread the flood to barricade what he wants to protect. Find it. Find what each one of you has to protect. Defend it with your lives. Because if Shock isnt stopped here today the entire world, and the worlds far beyond this one will be in grave danger. So do not fear. If he has 100 soldiers each of us must kill 10. If he has 1000 each of us must kill 100. If he was 1 milion...it's still good odds for us. Remember we were once the greatest duelists in excistence. We were selected to guard this place for a reason. If we cannot protect it then who can?"

Yugi stopped talking and everyone looked dead serious. Yugi drew a card and activated it. A sword appeared in his hand.

Kaiba: "Haha even now you re using Monster Reborn?"

Yugi gave a grin smile and then charged at the huge building. Everyone scattered going to their respective positions...

Meanwhile inside the building...


Leon: "Sir the guests have arrived"

Shock: "Excellent. Let us prepare an appropriate entrance for them"

To be continued...

Ti badass pou eimai

H αλήθεια είναι οτι έχει αρχίσει και μου θυμίζει λίγο Final Fantasy: Dissidia (είμαι σχεδόν σίγουρος οτι δεν το έχεις ακουστά όμως : P)

Συνέχισε έτσι όποτε έχεις χρόνο ; )

Ξερω το Final Fantasy(Λογω Kindgom Hearts που ειμαι φανατικος) αλλα οχι δεν ξερω το συγκεκριμενο και ουτε εχω ασχοληθει μαζι τους(ως τωρα). Παντως το παιρνω ως κοπλιμεντο

Στο dissidia, κεντρικοί ήρωες και αντίζηλοι τους απο όλα τα final fantasy καλούνται απο την Cosmos και τον Chaos αντίστοιχα για να πολεμήσουν για το ποιός θα επικρατήσει. Φυσικά η πλοκή είναι πολύ μεγαλύτερη απο αυτό, αλλα αυτή είναι η αρχική ιδέα. No spoilers intended : P

None taken

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Ξερω το Final Fantasy(Λογω Kindgom Hearts που ειμαι φανατικος) αλλα οχι δεν ξερω το συγκεκριμενο και ουτε εχω ασχοληθει μαζι τους(ως τωρα). Παντως το παιρνω ως κοπλιμεντο

Τώρα σε αγαπάω 1000000000000000000000000 φορές περισσότερο.

No homo~
~sin

Chapter 20: The Leader Of The Exiled Ones


TIME: 9:00 AM. LOCATION: BACK ENTRANCE:

Kaiba: "Oi Keith,Peg wait. Something is fishy here."

The two men stopped at Kaiba's command. In front of them lie the fortress's back gate.

Peg: "I dont know Kaiba-boy. Shouldnt it be more...noisy here?"

Kaiba: "That's what worries me."

Keith: "EVERYBODY DOWN!!!!"

Upon hearing Keith's voice Kaiba and Pegasus got on their knees with their hands covering their heads. Just as they hit the ground a large "BOOM" was heard above their heads and after that a strange voice saying. "Oh look at this, looks like I missed."

The three men got up on their feet, caughing, and saw 3 men, actually not excactly men judging by their size, standing in front of the gate.

"Reveal your identities" shouted Kaiba.

One of them replied. "Oh my how rude of us. We forgot to introduce ourselves." The creature stepped out of the smoke caused by the explosion and the 3 of them saw it clearly. He was tall around 2 meters high and was covered in a glamorous red armor.

Man: "My name is Thestalos. Part Of The Exiled Ones. And who might you be?"

Kaiba made a slight "Tsk".

Kaiba: "You ask for my name and you expect me to just say it to you? Don't screw with me kid, you are but a bug to me"

The two other figures appeared behind Thestalos.

Man2: "My name is Kuraz."

Man3: "And mine is Caius. I think it's mandatory to know the name of the man who killed you that's why we reveal our names."

Pegasus:"Excellent! My precious monarchs in flesh and blood. Now please Thesti-boy,Kuri-boy and Caius-boy, *His smile vanished at this point* allow us to show you what happens to creatures who dissobey their masters"

Caius started laughing. "Masters you say? Who do you think you are fool?"

Pegasus waved his hair backwards with his left hand revealing his Millenium eye to Caius. "My name is Maximilian Pegasus, Caius-boy. In other words your creator"

Kuraz's expression darkened. Kaiba saw a drop of sweat down Thestalos's armor, but Caius remained calm.

Caius: "I couldnt care less, fool. Master ordered us to let noone through here so either turn around, or die."

This time Keith spoke. "Look kiddo we've wasted too much time on you already now either move or...

Caius: "Who the hell are you?"

Keith's jaw dropped. "Unforgivable!!! Go get them! LAUNCHER SPIDER!!!"

A huge Mechanical creature arose behind Keith and started charging at Caius. It fired 4 times and hit Caius head on. When the smoke cleared though Caius was still there unaffaected by the impact. "Was that an attack?"

Keith seemed furious. He activated another card and a machine gun appeared in his hand. "DIEEEEE"

He sterted shooting at Caius. Caius simply snatched his fingers and the gun exploded, sending Keith flying a few meters behind.

Kaiba turned at his direction. "You idiot don't make reckless things."

At the same time another explosion was heard and Kaiba turned around and saw that Launcher Spider was utterly destroyed.

Thestalos gave them a bored look. "Is that all you've got?"

He raised his hand and it burst in fire. Kaiba saw the number "3" written on it's palm. "FIREBALL" he said

A large fireball came blasting out of his hand straight at Kaiba. Just before hitting him the fire vanished in thin air. Kaiba raised his head and saw a small creature smiling and touching it's belly. "Thank you for the meal" it said. He recognised it was Peg's Toon summoned Skull.

Kaiba stod up and activated 2 of his cards at once. Two creatures appeared in front of him.

The one was a green Genie and the second one was an oversized blue Sea Horse.

"Did you call us Seto" asked the Genie

Kaiba: "La jin, Kaiser lend me your strength."

The two creatures nodded. Meanwhile Keith was back on his feet. Kaiba saw two creatures in front of him as well. The first was a ferocius ugly looking creature Kaiba recognised as Zoa and the second was a Yellow mechanical monster.

Keith: "Zoa, Slot Machine tear them to pieces"

Along with Toon Summoned Skull all 5 creatures attacked at the enemies at once.

Kuraz stepped ahead and drew his sword. He attacked all 5 of them at once. La jin reached first but was sliced down in a single blow by Kuraz. Kaiser Sea horse raised his spear to attack but Kuraz was too fast slaying him with a quick stab. Zoa punched Kuraz with full strength but he blocked with his sword. Then with his free hand he released a small beam that pirced through Zoa. Toon SUmmoned Skull bite at Kuraz's hand causing him to bleed. Kuraz shouted from pain and moved his hand to throw the monster away. Slot Machine found the opportunity and fired his lazers at Kuraz but before they reach him they stopped and in midair and returned back to him crashing the creature to pieces.

Kaiba: "What did just happen?"

Pegasus: "It's his doing." He pointed at Caius.

Kaiba: "What do you mean?"

Pegasus: " He can move objects with his mind if they are close to him"

Keith: "That's a nasty ability. He is a hell of a guy."

Pegasus looked more serious than ever. "Indeed he is. He is Caius The Shadow Monarch. Leader of The Exiled Ones..."

TIME 9:00 AM. LOCATION:FRONT ENTRANCE

Shock,Mobius and Leon were standing still in front of the huge entrance of the mansion.

Mobius: "Sir, they are coming. Let me take care of them for you."

Shock: "Thank you Mobius. I would appriciate that"

Mobius took a few steps ahead and raised his sword. He could clearly see 3 figures fast approaching. The time has come he thought. He raised his sword. It was painted blue with glittering crystals in it's edge. He could now see them clearly. Jack,Yugi and Yusei. All three of them were now standing in front of him. He raised his sword and turned around...

He felt cold. Really cold. He gathered all his strength and opened his eyes. He looked down to his chest and saw a sword buried in it. He looked up and saw that the wielder of the sword was none other than Shock. With all his remaining strength he wishpered

"How....did...you...know....?"

To be continued...

Chapter 21: Secrets Revealed

Shock looked at Mobius's puzzled eyes.

"You almost had me completely fooled Mobius. I always thought you were my most loyal servant. That is..until a few days ago. This phrase gave you away"

Flashback:

Spoiler:

"Up until that moment I didn't even mention that the TSO were attacking us. So how could you know? I knew because I had my own spies among the TSO but how did you know? The answer is simple Mobius: YOU WERE THE TRAITOR"

Mobius couldn't move, much more speak. He slowly turned around. He gathered his remaining power and shouted in high voice:

"YUGI PLEASE WIN THIS WAR! AVENGE MY DEATH"

Yugi saw Mobius collapsing and tried to run towards him. Jack hold him by the hand. "What are you doing?"

"Let me go Jack. He is my friend..."

Several Years Ago...

???: "What? This is all you've got? You'll die in a second in a real combat if that's all your strength"

A blue suited figure got up from the ground and grabbed his fallen sword. "You sure live up to your expectations, Yugi."

"Well you have to prove me the same Mobius"

Mobius smiled and charged at Yugi...


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"NO! I WON'T ALLOW YOU TO GO! IT'S TOO DANGEROUS!"

"But Yugi, this Shock guy trying to gather all the monarchs and if you want to defeat him then I can be the perfect bait. I mean I am a monarch after all"

"It's true but we can beat him even if you stay here. I know your master is dead but he was my friend and I swore to him I would protect you. I am actually thinking of forming my own army. You could be a great member of my army, you have proven to be a very strong fighter."

"I know but still I think It would be better If I went. I mean think about it. You'll have info on him from the inside."

.............................................

"We have two new members in our army. Their names are Steff and Vem. They claim to know Shock in person and have proven very strong duelists. Vem, Steff welcome to the TSO"

Vem: "An honour to be here sir"

Steff: "Likewise"

.............................................

Yugi: "What do you mean he knows?"
Mobius: "He knows there is a traitor between his ranks. And you know what that means..."
Yugi: "...we have a traitor among our ranks as well"

PRESENT...

"Yugi...Yugi...Yugi snap out of it"

Yugi suddenly opened his eyes and show Jack holding his right shoulder. "What happened?"

Jack: "You suddenly passed out. You said something about that guy being your friend"

Yugi: "Oh no! MOBIUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS"

Jack looked at Yusei puzzled. Then suddenly Yugi got serious. "I do not have time to explain. You two stay here and stall Shock. I'll go to the place where the traitor is". Jack and Yusei nodded and activated their cards. "Good luck Yugi"


Yusei: "LEND ME YOUR POWER! TURBO WARRIOR"
Jack: "TURN THEM TO PIECES! VICE DRAGON"


The two creatures appeared before them ready for battle. Shock nodded and Leon took a step forward.

Leon: "I am afraid I cannot let you through here. My master insists that you should turn around and leave right now"

Totally ignoring him the creatures dashed by him charging at Shock. Leon shook his head and moving quickly as the wind appeared right in front of Shock. He took 2 white gloves out of his pocket and wore them. "Time for things to get dirty..."


Meanwhile at the back gate...

Keith: "Leader of The Exiled Ones you say? He must be damn strong."

Pegasus: "Indeed he is. Be careful"

Keith: "Well then let's see if he can cope with this. SEND THEM FLYING! METALZOA!!!!"

Zoa's wound closed and heavy pieces of armour appeared around his body parts. The creature looked ferocius. "KILL THEM BOY"

Metalzoa started running towards Caius. Upon reaching close to him he delivered a ferocius punch at Caius's right side. Caius slowly raised his second finger and just like that stopped Zoa's punch.

Keith: "WHAT???"

Then with a snap of his left hand's finger Zoa turned into thousand pieces, his blood flying around the air. Keith shouted from pain and Kaiba saw his red bar reaching at the middle. Impossible he thought. Is he a monster?

Caius: "Now that you realised you are but lowly worms against us would you mind retreating as far away from here as possible?"

Kaiba: "Are you an idiot? Peg you take care of the red guy. Keith take the Kuraz guy and I ll take care of him"

Peg and Keith nodded without second thought.

Peg: "Time to get serious I think"

Keith: "Tsk, guess there's no choice"

Both of them drew a card and activated it!

Pegasus: "From the pits of hell rise and show us your power... RELINQUISHED!"

Keith: " Shoot them down to death, BARREL DRAGON"

The man named Thestalos clapped his hands. "Very good. I sense some strong monsters over here. And I thought this would be boring"

Kaiba and Caius were staring at each other. Around them the batle was growing imense.
"Aren't you going to attack?" asked Caius

"I am thinking of the proper way to do it. And since you are giving me time I can think of an even better strategy.

"I really hope you ain't just words. Cause then I'd be mad"

Kaiba smiled and drew a card. A giant hole appeared behind Caius

"Let's see how you like my Dark Hole"

Suddenly a tramendous force came from inside the hole and nearby objects, such as trees, were sucked in it. Caius seemed to be pulled in as well but after murmuring some words the hole vanished.

Caius: "You'll have to try better than that. My turn"

He snatched his finger and suddenly dark smoke appeared in front of him. When the smoke cleared a dark dressed rider, riding a black horse was standing in front of him.

Caius: "Doomcaliber, please take care of him for me."

Doomcaliber: "Yes master"

Kaiba: "In that case.. MYSTIC HORSEMAN COME FORTH"

A weird creature appeared in front of Kaiba. It's body was half animal and half human, with the upper half being the human one. In his left hand he was holding a battle axe. The two riders clashed with each other both delivering strong hits, but none of them seemed to have an edge. Meanwhile Relinquished sent a dark sphere of energy straight at Thestalos only to be repelled by one of the monarch's fireballs. Barrel Dragon kept shooting at Kuraz but he was evading the shots with ease. Doomcaliber and Mystic Horseman were fighting at a same level, with Doomcaliber having a slight edge, since he managed to deliver a vital stab in the horseman's right side. By activating a card Kaiba healed the horseman and now doomcaliber was the one being pushed behind. With another snatch of Caius's fingers two more dark knights appeared next to the first one and fast as a lighting surrounded and delivered several hits at Mystic Horseman. Barrel Dragon rushed to his side but Kuraz found the opportunity and slashed through the dragon's armor. The dragon slowly fell down and Kaiba saw Keith falling down as well. Relinquished retreated near Peg and Mystic Horseman stumbled backwars as well.

"Come on this is way too easy" complained Thestalos

Keith: "Damt I am sorry guys, they completely outsmarted me"

Keith's bars were almost empty. "At this rate I'll really die" he said.

"Stop talking nonsense. I am the creator of every single creature over here. You thought that even for a second they could defeat me? You are wrong. Kaiba let's do this"

Kaiba nodded.

Kaiba/Pegaus: "GO! POLYMERIZATION"

Their two monsters vanished in a hazard of various colours and in their place stood two new ones

Spoiler:

Pegasus: "The true battle begins now"

Meanwhile at the Rear gate....

"They are coming"

Witch King nodded in agreement to what Panos said.

"Looks like there are four of them"

Witch King: "Indeed Panos. ONLY 4 of them"

Granmarg: "They are not 4. They are only two"

Panos: "I can clearly see 4 figures."

Granmarg turned and looked at Panos. "They are only 2"

Moments later four figures stopped before them. One of them spoke. He was tall with black spiky hair and was wearing a blue cape. "So you are our welcoming party. Mind sharing your names?"

"The Exiled Number 8 Granmarg"

"Kauko" said Panos

"I do not feel I should reveal you my name. At least not before you reveal yours"

Another man, shorter than the first one with short brown hair jumped ahead and spoke" Yuki Judai, nice to meet you. My stubborn friend behind me is Chazz Prinston. And those two are..."

He stopped talking and saw a stash coming through his chest. He turned around and saw that one of the men behind them was holding Chazz by the neck.

The two figures behind them, the one white haired and the other one blonde, had a smile on their faces upon saying:

"Marik Ishtar"

"Yami Bakura"

To be continued...

Chapter 22: Overwhelming Power

"Good job, Marik,Bakura" said Granmarg

Panos: "Now I see what you meant when you said they were only 2"

Chazz couldn't believe it. How could this happen? They trusted those two. He made a slight "Tsk" and slipped a card out of his sleeve. He activated it and suddenly the whole location changed. The castle vanished and a brown cliff appeared in it's place. On top of the hill there were many small white houses. From the inside of the houses many small colourfoul creatures appeared. Bakura, puzzled loosened his grip on Chazz and he found the opportunity to escape, rushing to were Marik was and delivering a strong punch to his stomach causing him to let go of his stash. He then grabbed Judai and rushed back putting some distance between them and the enemies.

Bakura: "What is this place?

"This is the effect of my Ojama Country card. Now my ojamas go, attack them"

Many little creatures came dashing down the hill charging at the 5 of them.

Bakura: "Headless Knight come forth"

A knight without head wearing white armor, and holding a sword and a shield appeared before Bakura. "Take care of them". The knight nodded and charged.

Marik: "Pathetic as always. Dark Jeroid I ll leave this to you"

An ugly faceless creature appeared. It had 10 arms and no eyes. Along with headless knight it charged at Chazz's creatures. Meanwhile Chazz saw that Panos charged bare-handed at the creatures while Witch King and Granmarg stood still.

Chazz: "Judai are you ok?"

Judai: "I can't walk like this, much less fight."

Chazz cursed out loud and activated another card. "Armed Dragon please take Judai away from here, back to our hideout. I am counting on you"

The dragon nodded and lifted Judai in his back.

"As If I'd let you do that" shouted Bakura.

He activated a card and a thousand small daggers appeared. With his command they all launched against Chazz's dragon. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" shouted Chazz. Just before hitting Judai an explosion was heard. When the smoke cleared all the daggers were gone and a purple dressed man holding a green staff stood there with his arms crossed in his chest. Bakura's eyes blinked in fear while Chazz smiled and said " Yugi!!!"

Meanwhile at the Back Gate...

"GO THOUSAND EYES RESTRICT ATTACK"

The one-eyed monster charged at Kuraz. It launched a dark energy bolt and Kuraz barely avoided it. Kuraz turned to face the creature but was too slow and the creature hit him head on with a dark bolt. Kuraz got launched a few meters back and landed on the huge metal gate of the fortress. Thestalos shook his head dissapointed at Kuraz and made a step forward to face the creature. Meanwhile Rabid Horseman charged at the 3 knights Caius had summoned. The first knight speared at it, but the horseman split the spear in two with it's axe and then put his axe deep inside the knight's chest. The second approached from behind but with a knock from his shield the the horseman managed to repel him enough, to find space and launch his axe at him hitting him head on the last approached and tryied to stab him the side, but the horseman kicked him with his back legs so hard it's armor shuttered.

Kaiba: "Looks like your knights were no match. Is this all you can do?"

Caius shook his head looking dissapointed. "And just when I thought I found worthy opponents you come at me with these two pathetic creatures claiming they are your strongest. DO YOU EVEN REALISE THESE CAN'T EVEN TOUCH ME? DON'T YOU RELISE I CAN KILL YOU ALL WITH THE CLAP OF MY HANDS? You insolent humans I will teach you what true despair is"

Caius took a step forward and Kaiba heard Pegasus saying "Watch out Kaiba-boy". Before he could even blink Caius had vanished. Where did he go? he thought. A voice answered his thoughts. "I am right behind you" He turned to face him but when he turned around noone was there. He stood like that for about 10 seconds when he heard Keith screaming. "HELP MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE"

Kaiba snapped out of his daydreaming and like a movie being showed in slow motion saw Caius holding Keith by the neck. He also saw Pegasus, Thousand Eyes Restrict and Rabid Horsman charging at Caius all at the same time. With a smile upon his face Caius raised his free hand and slowly moved it towards Keith's stomach. Upon touching the stomach his hand didn't stop and pierced right through Keith. Kaiba stood motionless, as if he was not interested in the matter at all. Then Caius dropped Keith's body aside and with a snap of his fingers rabid horsman and Thousand Eyes Restrict vanished. He then turned to face Peg. Kaiba lowered his head and whispered "Unforgivable"

Caius: "What was that? You said something?"

Kaiba raised his head and looked Caius straight in the place were his eyes were supposed to be" I can accept you dealing with Keith, he was careless he deserved it. And Pegasus monster, yeah I'll agree it was weak. But you dare screw with me going around calling me weak. You've brought this to yourself creature." Kaiba put his hand in his pocket and drew three cards out. "Prepare to die"

With all his remaining strength he shouted. "COME TO MY AID MY MOST POWERFUL CREATURES! BLUE EYES WHITE DRAGONS!!!!


Meanwhile at the Front Gate...

"Is this all?"

Jack: "Wow he is a monster"

Jack stumbled behind to were Yusei was. The man Shock had with him defeated every creature they sent at him bare-handed.

Yusei: " Don't lose hope Jack. We need to gain enough time for Yugi"
Jack: " You are rigt Yusei"
Yusei: "If our creatures can't do it then we will"

They both charged at Leon and while running gold armor engulfed both of them. They clashed with butler. His speed and strength was inhuman. Still they kept fighting him until they could fight no more. They distanced themselves to catch their breath.

Yusei: "I just hope Yugi won't take a long time. I don't think we can last more than a few more minutes"

Meanwhile at the Rear Gate...

Chazz: "Yugi is that really you?"

The purple dressed wizard came descending from the sky. At the same time Chazz saw Yugi walking towards them from the ground. He smiled a smile of relief and turned at the enemies determined.

Yugi: "Good job Dark Magician! Looks like I was right"

Bakura: "Damn you! How did you know it was us?"

Yugi: "I didn't. I figured it out on my way here. The traitor(s) couldn't be Jack or Yusei since they were behind me for a long time and they could have easily killed me if they wanted to. Also Keith and Pegasus fought and killed some of Shock's soldiers so it couldn't be them either. I trust Kaiba as much as I trust myself so I excluded that possibility. Steff wasn't present when we were discussing the attack so he couldn't know and so he couldn't inform Shock. Vem was Shock's arch enemy when he was alive so there is no way he could be helpin ghim so the only ones left were the 4 gathered here. So I came and I was correct. Once again you two *He pointed at Marik and Bakura* stand in my way. Let's end this quickly."

Granmarg: "As expected from the leader of the TSO. Nice perception"

Yugi just noticed Granmarg. "Thank you, but who might you three be?"

"My apologies for not introducing myself properly. I am The Exiled Ones No. 8: Granmarg"

"Witch King"

"Kauko"

Yugi: "I see. But I really doubt you are the weakest member of the Exiled Ones. You seem...strong"

Granmarg: "You flatter me with your words. Anyways it was nice meeting you but I think it is time for me to depart. I do not think I could defeat you, Leader of the TSO so I might as well hide in the safety of the castle for now. Until next time"

The monarch waved goodbye and with a snap of his fingers he vanished in thin air.

Meanwhile Dark Jeroid and Headless Knight defeated all the tiny cratured and turned to face Yugi's Dark Magician.


Yugi/Bakura/Marik: "Let the battle begin"

To be continued...

Ετοίμαζα μεγάλο post αλλα σβήστηκε επιδή κόπηκε το internet =.=

Περιληπτικά:

Ο Yugi λιποθύμησε; Σίγουρα αυτό εννοείς;

Definition of nod:
1. To lower and raise the head quickly, as in agreement or acknowledgment.
2. To let the head fall forward when sleepy.

Headless Knight has no head o_o

Η σκηνή με τους Doomcaliber και τον Rabid Horseman ηταν καλή! GJ

Δε μπορώ να φανταστώ τον Kaiba να είναι φρικαρισμένος...συνέχεια cool δεν ήταν; Μόνο όσο ο Takahashi τον χρησιμοποιούσε ώς "περίεργο άμυαλο σατανικό κακό της ιστορίας" είχε φρικάρει όταν έχανε (δηλαδή μέχρι που έχασε απο τον Exodia)

Έχασα κάτι, το Restrict άφησε το Thestalos και γύρησε στον Caius;

I can accept tou insulting me all day. I can accept you defeating my creatures all day. I can accept you humiliating me and treating me like trash. But when you touch the people I care for I cannot ever forgive you.

This is so not the Kaiba I remember o_o Yugi ή Yusei αλλα όχι Kaiba. Ο Κaiba θα έλεγε ακριβώς το αντίθετο, π.χ. "You dare insult me...you brought despair upon yourself!!"


Δεν είναι καθόλου άσχημο fanfic, το μόνο πρόβλημα που πιστεύω οτι έχει είναι τα αγγλικά, αλλα καταλαβαίνω απόλυτα τη δυσκολία, συνάντησα ακριβώς τα ίδια όταν δοκίμασα κι εγώ να γράψω! Δεν εννοώ στους διαλόγους, λίγο στην περιγραφή μερικές φορές μου φαίνεται πως κάτι λείπει. Practice makes perfect, keep up the good work ;D

Επιτελους ενα ουσιωσης ποστ!

1) Που λυποθυμησε? Δεν νομιζω μαλλον λαθος καταλαβες.
2) Οταν λεω nod, ακομα και χωρις κεφαλι ρε, με μια ελαφρια κινηση του σωματος προς τα εμπρος καταλαβαινει ο αλλος οτι εισαι οκ.
3) "Έχασα κάτι, το Restrict άφησε το Thestalos και γύρησε στον Caius;" Ναι γιατι ειδε οτι ο Caius θα σκωτωνε τον Keith και ενστικτωδως εσπευσε να τον προστατεψει αγνωωντας τον κινδυνο για τη δικη του ζωη.
4)Για τον Καιba εχεις δικιο θα το αλλαξω ουτε εμενα μου αρεσε.
5)Και ναι φτανω σε καποια σημεια οταν γραφω που σκεφτομαι, πως να το περιγραψω αυτο τωρα? Και δεν μου βγαινει. Αλλα we do it for the heck of it

Thanks 4 reading, ξαναδιαβασε το part με τον Καιbα και πες μου αν ειναι καλυτερο ετσι!